例题二(2007年真题)
Directions
Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use“Li Ming”instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
范文
Dear sir or madam,
As a student of this university, I would like to take the opportunity to express my appreciation for your assistance as always. Meanwhile, I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning the quality of the library service.
In the first place, I find that most keyboards of the library computers are in poor operation, which greatly inconveniences users. I would also recommend the library to improve the efficiency of purchasing new books and subscribing to academic journals. Last but not least, the study rooms need to be furnished with a better lighting system.
I hope that you take my suggestions into serious consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
译文
尊敬的先生或女生，
作为本校学生，我想利用这个机会对于您一直以来的帮助表示感谢。同时，我也想对图书馆的服务提出一些建议，相信将有助于服务的提高。
首先，我发现图书馆电脑的大部分键盘都有操作上的问题，给用户带来很多不便。我也想建议图书馆提高购买新书和定购学术期刊的效率。最后，自习教室的照明系统也需要进一步的改进。
我希望您能够认真考虑我的建议。
您真诚的，
李明
建议信开头常用句式套话
I am writing in reply to...
I would like to suggest that...
I am writing with my suggestion/proposal about...
I am writing to express my views concerning...
You have asked me for my advice with regard to...and I will try to make some conductive suggestions.
You have asked me for some advice on how to improve...I will try to give some useful suggestions.
You asked for advice concerning(with regard to)...and I will try to make some suggestions.
I have received your letter saying...I recommend that...
I am writing to express my views about...
建议信结尾常用句式和套话
I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decisionmaking anyway.
I would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.
Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you.
I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.
Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
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发表于 2012-7-7 16:16:40
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